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Take Away My Eyes by ~actualtwilight:iconactualtwilight:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I don't want to see right now
Don't want my tears to run free
I want to be okay right now
Without pretending
So I'll finally believe myself
Please don't patronize me
By pretending you've gone through this
I may seem apathetic
Because all I want is to be free
From my whirlwind of emotions
Too much for me to bear
I'm bursting at the seems
With things I don't want to feel
For you, about you, against you, concerning you
I'm tired of looking out
And seeing what I don't have
But desperately want
So please, if you love me
Take away my eyes
So I don't have to see
©2007-2009 ~actualtwilight
:iconactualtwilight:

Author's Comments

this was just something i wrote to stop myself from crying for no reason at what would have been a very embarrassing time.....and now I'm wondering why people seem to think that I can't take things that might be hurtful to me.....so they hide it when all I really want is for things to out in the open

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:icondarktimesharry:
~darktimesharry Feb 28, 2007, 7:32:16 PM
I love this!

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"I fell in love with somebody like you. And I know, yeah, that you wanted me to" 'Drown' by Chasen
:iconcronocoffin144:
~cronocoffin144 Feb 28, 2007, 11:41:52 PM
reminds me of one of my own. i love it

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it matters not who lives
the dead shall die first
:iconactualtwilight:
~actualtwilight Mar 1, 2007, 4:05:36 PM
thanks....what do you think about me writing more...like with mouth or brain.....or something wierd like that????

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
:iconactualtwilight:
~actualtwilight Mar 1, 2007, 4:23:49 PM
thank you...what does it remind you of that's yours????? i may have to check it out....

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
:iconcronocoffin144:
~cronocoffin144 Mar 1, 2007, 4:43:35 PM
my poem "the impossible between"...i think you may have already read that one, i dunno

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it matters not who lives
the dead shall die first
:iconactualtwilight:
~actualtwilight Mar 1, 2007, 4:45:55 PM
i think i have too....i may have even favorited it

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
:iconcronocoffin144:
~cronocoffin144 Mar 1, 2007, 4:46:29 PM
that'd have been nice

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it matters not who lives
the dead shall die first
:iconactualtwilight:
~actualtwilight Mar 1, 2007, 4:52:51 PM
i bet i did.....it's sad that i can't remember all of the things i've faved cuz i've faved things so much

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
:icondarktimesharry:
~darktimesharry Mar 1, 2007, 5:18:18 PM
what?

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"I fell in love with somebody like you. And I know, yeah, that you wanted me to" 'Drown' by Chasen
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~actualtwilight Mar 1, 2007, 5:21:25 PM
more poems like that....with the "take away my..." fill in the blank

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
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