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I see you
Across the room
And it's almost like it was planned
This chance meeting
As if it's an old date,
Set but never broken
And I almost call you over to me
A force of habit
Caught up
In the memories of
How we used to be
Back in the times
When I looked into your eyes
And they always said
What you wanted me to know
Even when words were impossible,
When my hand would only have to reach out
To find its place in yours,
When my scent was forever mingled
With yours
No matter how much fabric softener
I dumped in the wash,
And when I could find comfort
At the mere sight of you
Right up until it ended
And we we became who we are now
On our own
And left the memories
Of who we used to be
To fade into the past
©2007-2009 ~actualtwilight
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Hmm, what to say? This is not one of my favorites...but I'm posting it anyway. It's apart of my self challenge...number 69.
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Really? Well why not? I love it. :D Yay for fabric softener!!!
Anyways....I like this one. A lot. Must :+fav: it...it just works....cha.....

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The fallen angel rises...
I don't know....it's just sounds odd to me...like when I read it in my head it comes off weird. And yes, fabric softener is awesome....but only if it smells really good. And thanks....for the fave and all..and for liking it, you know. lqtm....I'm such a rambling dork sometimes.

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
i like it!
it's really good!

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so there's this boy...
Thanks....and thanks for the fave too.

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
I like it. It does read a little strangely, but it expresses your emotions and that's the main thing :)

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If you want to know a few creative ways to kill yourself, read the warning labels on consumer products.
Thanks, and I thought it did...but I also thought it was just me.

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"Isn't this the point of being young? It's your choice. People can live a hundred years without really living for a minute. You climb up here with me, it's one less minute you haven't lived."
you're welcome x2

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so there's this boy...

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